Script: Main Brief

Chelsea and I made a planned out a draft of our script before writing up our final version; this is to ensure that we can make any changes we feel necessary, and try to improve our script to ensure it is at its strongest.

Flashing back to the day of the murder, we see Kirstie in a large house, just about to leave to visit her nan. She is dressed in normal clothes, jeans and a top with her hair hanging loosely. She then reaches for a bottle of water and sits down looking out to the garden and decides to ring her sister.

Kirstie: Hi Louise May, just ringing to say that I'm home from work and I am just going to walk round to nans, I'll see you when I'm back."

She then slams her large wooden door. Whilst walking down the road, there are strange noises behind her but she takes no notice. It is dusk, so the visibility is limited. Continuing her walk down the dark streets, with only street lights to keep the street alight. Kirstie begins to walk down a dark alley way. In the background, we can see footsteps approaching the alley way then turning back on themselves.

Kirstie begins to hear mysterious noises, as it is dark and there is no one around, Kirstie decides to put her earphones in to cancel out the mysterious noises and begins to pick up her pace. We then see someone walking and then turning back on themselves. Voices start taunting her in her head, but Kirstie is too frightened to move. She can now feel someone over her shoulder. Scared for her life, Kirstie begins running as fast as her lungs will possibly take her.

In a dark cramped interview room, a teenager girl, with little colour to her face sits alone. Always looking to the ground, she looks scared and vulnerable. Her hair appears to be knotty, almost as if it hadn't been washed or brushed in weeks and the bags under her eyes seem to be increasing in size by the minute. On the television above, is the mornings news.

Radio host: Your news at 9. Yesterday morning, a school girl from East London, Kirstie Carter, was declared dead by Newham Police in the early hours this morning. Suspects are currently being questioned and the police are urging anyone with information to contact the police immediately.
The policewoman walks in as the news is playing. She is very tall and has her hair scraped back in a high, tight, ponytail. She has a strong, bold, striking face and looks extremely confident. However, the young girl now has her head in her hands and is clearly distressed. Realising why the girl is distressed, the policewoman immediately switches the tv off and sits down with her notes opposite the young girl.

Officer Smith: Who did it?

Louise May looks straight at the camera, it then fades to a black screen with, "the Demon," in red writing.